The Miracle !
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© Vinay Kumar Vaidya, Ujjain, 25/09/2014.
The world inside,
The world outside,
And the world in-between,
Move into one-another, smoothly, ......
Coalescing, ...
As I look the evening sky,
The solitary bird,
Flying high,
catches my eye,
Enters me,
All is silent and serene,
This first day of summer solstice,
And I am just no more!
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___________________
© Vinay Kumar Vaidya, Ujjain, 25/09/2014.
The world inside,
The world outside,
And the world in-between,
Move into one-another, smoothly, ......
Coalescing, ...
As I look the evening sky,
The solitary bird,
Flying high,
catches my eye,
Enters me,
All is silent and serene,
This first day of summer solstice,
And I am just no more!
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1 comment:
Enters > Enter, ...
And a comment,
I wrote on a page,where shared this poem was shared, ...
Look Prity! I had replaced the word 'Enter' by 'Enters', and then
realized I had killed the essential
beauty and meaning of the poem
that was in my thought,
while I wrote this poem.
'Enter' is the verb in the plural
form, used to identify the three
worlds that 'coalesce' into one,
while 'Enters' seems to imply
there is a 'fourth' also,
which I never meant!
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